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You shuffled down the street, hands in pockets, trying to find a way to relieve the gnawing sorrow that had taken up residence in your very soul. What a pain. You hated dealing with this…dare you say depression. It consumed your thoughts and feelings, pushed away those closest to you, leaving only itself.

How you hated it. You wanted friends, you wanted to be happy, but in your little world, happiness doesn’t exist. Anger doesn’t exist. Feelings don’t exist. There is just the depression. Just the sadness, the self-loathing, and the pain that they bring.

Your feet carried you to a quaint, ordinary café, a few steps from the bustling city streets, but yet the noise and the stress that came with the constant motion seemed to be nonexistent, and this place seemed like the perfect place to rest your feet before you continued on your journey.

A bell jangled as you hesitantly opened the door, peeking around the wooden frame. A handsome young man was behind the counter, cleaning mugs, his green eyes shining with a foreign emotion, perfectly tanned skin showcasing a lean but still muscular body. His brown hair was messy, as if he had just gotten out of bed, but somehow the style seemed to suit him.

Glancing up, the barista’s face broke into a huge grin. “Hola senorita!” he called, waving to you. “Bienvenida! Welcome! Come on in, have a seat!” The man looked so energetic, you found it hard to refuse his offer, and you hesitantly entered the building and took a seat on a stool in front of the bar.

“My name is Antonio! And what can I get for una mujer bonita like yourself?” he asked, leaning against the counter and gracing you with another smile.

“D-Do you have any hot chocolate?” you hesitantly asked, unsure of what exactly the café served.

Un Chocolate caliente! One moment seniorita!” he said, and he moved to make it, but it wasn’t like any hot chocolate you had seen before. First off, he used heated milk instead of water, and he melted actual chocolate into the steaming liquid rather than instant power. And with the snap of his wrist, the whipped cream container was sent spiraling into the air, and you watched in wonder as he caught it right side up and coated the drink with a thick layer of the dairy product.

“Tada!” he cried, presenting you with the drink. You clapped before taking a sip of the hot chocolate, and you swore up and down that it was the best drink you had ever tasted. In fact, you liked it so much that you offered a hesitant smile of your own, and Antonio leaned back, still smiling.

“You should smile more. It makes you muy bonita,” he said approvingly. Your gaze became glued to your mug as you carefully stirred the hot chocolate, watching the whipped cream swirl.

“I wish it was that easy…” you sighed.

“Oh? Why don’t you tell me about it?” he replied, looking genuinely concerned, and you told him everything. About losing your job. About your boyfriend dumping you. About the death of your beloved childhood pet. Every little thing was released, all while Antonio silently refilled your mug until your story was finished.

Dios Mio, you have been through a lot…” he said mournfully, and you nodded your agreement. “However, things can only look up! You can start working here Monday, and soon we’ll have you flashing that pretty little smile more often!”

“Really? You mean it?” you asked, not even daring to get your hopes up.

“I wouldn’t have said it if I didn’t mean it chica! Now, what is your name?”

“______ ______” you said, offering your hand for him to shake. Instead, he leaned across the counter and drew you into a tight hug, which you gladly reciprocated.

Un placer, _______, a pleasure to meet you.”
A request for :iconlightringstars:, who wanted SpainXDepressed!Reader. I hope this was good enough!

Please tell me if I got a translation wrong, I wrote this using my limited knowledge of the language.

Edit: Okay, I think I fixed everything with the translations. Thank you for the help!
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PrussiasKitten Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
The way the hot chocolate was made.... That is how I make mine....ermergerd! *sighs sadly* I wish I had a spain there....
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MadHatBunnie Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2014
Tee hee so cute! c:
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SomeLonelyDoll Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
That is so cute! 
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwwwww so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
Thank you!
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your Welcome!
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moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013
:)
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SixDripsOfCirrus Featured By Owner May 29, 2013
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~
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moriartyssniper Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
:iconsqueeeplz:
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SixDripsOfCirrus Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
xD
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sammy-vj-chan Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This made me cry happy tears... I connected with Reader-tan. The job issue, the childhood pet, I've had a bunch of boy troubles... Damn dude! You're really good at this!
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moriartyssniper Featured By Owner May 8, 2013
I'm glad you liked it so much!
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sammy-vj-chan Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
And I'm glad you write so well!
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:iconmoriartyssniper:
moriartyssniper Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
Thank you!
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sammy-vj-chan Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^_^
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daisy6785 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
yay fluff!!!!
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:iconmoriartyssniper:
moriartyssniper Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
It's wonderful stuff!
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daisy6785 Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
fluff on sheep yay *points at your icon* (i know random right )
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moriartyssniper Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
Everyone loves the icon...
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:icondaisy6785:
daisy6785 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
who wouldn't?
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:iconmoriartyssniper:
moriartyssniper Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
There is one person...
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:icondaisy6785:
daisy6785 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
who?
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That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's spelled seńorita.
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:iconmoriartyssniper:
moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
Yes, I know. My computer doesn't offer the little squiggly thing over the n.
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That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, at least make it senorita.
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:iconmoriartyssniper:
moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
I will. No need to be an ass about it.
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:iconthat1asianchick:
That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry. I wasn't trying to be. -_-;
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:iconmoriartyssniper:
moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2013
It sounded like it.
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That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry. I'll just leave you alone.
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minchen0897 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
D'aaaaaaaaawww! Cute! But i feel sorry for depressed!Reader-chan...
Anyway, well done!
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moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
Thank you!
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darkcreamz95 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Daw it's still sweet! ^_^ Ah I feel happy now~ ><
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moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
Good! I'm glad!
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xXZerudaDatenOniXx Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hehe, so sugoi~
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katykat529 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
OK first off, loved it! I just wanted to point out that you said "un mujer" when it should be "una mujer". And you used the masculine form of pretty the second time "bonita" is more correct. Last thing, mio dio is Italian. In Spanish it would be Dios Mio. Sorry for being a grammar nazi. Loved the story though! ˇbien trabajo!
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That1AsianChick Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^^; don't worry. I am too.
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:iconmoriartyssniper:
moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
No, it's fine! I did ask for help (and there is a reason I am failing Spanish right now). Thank you!
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katykat529 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
No problemo~!
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VickyandRaq Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this so much. ;v;
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moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
Thanks!
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tianhuifan Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*bonita (You used the masculine form)
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moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
Thank you!
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tianhuifan Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
'welcome :p
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tianhuifan Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD Loved the story, though!
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kalliat Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I believe it's dios mio, not mio dio


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I think this is my new fav Spain X Reader c:
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moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
Yes, a bunch of other people caught that...

Thank you!
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NEIKUUKWOW Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
ˇDios mio, me encanta!
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moriartyssniper Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
Gracias!
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cosmicaquarium Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013
Reading this really made my day. It was wonderful! (:
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